tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3828886149891259713.post1522065563496421078..comments2020-07-01T10:35:09.578+00:00Comments on My art grows around me: Offering (3)Marjojohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12640985618819395961noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3828886149891259713.post-48073701807014036052009-07-18T22:32:38.352+00:002009-07-18T22:32:38.352+00:00i haven't forgotten i'm due you some form ...i haven't forgotten i'm due you some form of longer exploration of earlier comments but holidays and flu ahve got in the way!<br /><br />on the other hand i've finally got a rough note for the shoe poem which should be up in the next couple of daysswisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924594772578153947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3828886149891259713.post-37542280015618322492009-06-20T20:58:26.014+00:002009-06-20T20:58:26.014+00:00Carl Hiassen wrote that a writer should edit, edit...Carl Hiassen wrote that a writer should edit, edit, edit and erase all truly unnecessary words. Your pared back poems are exquisite. <br /><br />Hope you are feeling less buggered by M.E. Glad you're still exhibiting.<br /><br />How long have we been commenting on each-other's blogs now? This journey is so interesting.Susan Krusehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08244475165823968529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3828886149891259713.post-26559471804811637322009-06-19T16:34:31.759+00:002009-06-19T16:34:31.759+00:00girls in dresses
stiff
as blotting paper
burnin...girls in dresses <br />stiff<br />as blotting paper <br /><br />burning <br />to be happy <br /><br />.<br />the blotting paper is such an image! love it.<br /><br />its nice the end note, the desire for images to enter the other...mansuetudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03805383049085040581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3828886149891259713.post-83389762229159372662009-06-17T10:57:56.973+00:002009-06-17T10:57:56.973+00:00Thank you for replying to my work too...and equall...Thank you for replying to my work too...and equally sorry for being tardy in responding...so much is going on.<br />I have some new work to post in the next few weeks, so you shall see some cose ups very soon.<br />Thanks again for the feedback.My ownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06876073086121364782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3828886149891259713.post-61408803020220881292009-06-17T09:47:26.370+00:002009-06-17T09:47:26.370+00:00Brilliant. A whole tradition of cut ups, erasings ...Brilliant. A whole tradition of cut ups, erasings i.e. an artist who removed the full stops or letter 'e' from each sentence (something like that). Are you going to keep the defaced pieces? Visual/text pieces? Really not in gear today and names escape me. But your edited poems really work in this way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com